|
Post by iivie on Mar 29, 2008 22:52:20 GMT -5
Name: Ivy Love Fay Age: 16 Experience: I've been roleplaying for about three and a half years now I think. :] How you found us: neopets. ^-^ Role play Sample:
Lyra felt herself exhale as she was shoved against the brick wall in the allyway between The Pink Spoon and the auto repair company. She closed her eyes as Ty's hands fell upon her hips and he pressed his lips against hers. Her fingers played across his back as she bit his bottom lip, telling him the kiss was over. He leaned back some and grinned playfully, leaning forward and sneaking in one more quick kiss. She narrowed her eyes, and grinned. "Do you have to go?" He asked for the millionth time. Lyra sighed.
"I'm afraid so." She answered, her eyes watering. "Don't make this worse Ty." She pleaded. Ty's eyes dropped to the ground as a car sounded from behind them. "I gotta go." She draped her arms across his chest and hugged him tight, before running to the car where her impatient father waited. A tear dripped down her cheek as they drove off. Ty took a deep breath and headed up the alley, kicking an old beer can that was in his way. He shoved open the door to The Pink Spoon and slumped into a chair by the counter.
|
|
|
Post by whisp. on Mar 30, 2008 11:35:35 GMT -5
Iivie, your sample was good, I just wished that you would have exaplained a little more to what was happening. I was sort of lost at why she was leaving, but it was good.
I think you are going to have to work a little harder, but I know you can do it!
And if you have any questions feel free to PM myself or the other admin Poe. Welcome to Realms!
Now start on that character of yours!
|
|
|
Post by iivie on Mar 30, 2008 12:36:39 GMT -5
Yeah, that was from a roleplay I started on my forum, and I like to keep people guessing when I first start then the story unfolds later in the roleplay. But I will try as hard as I can, I promise. :] Thank you so much! ^-^ I'm pretty sure I'll have more questions. Haha, I ask a lot of them. XD
|
|