Mutt

[mutt]

Mutt:
Age: 15
Experience: I've been roleplaying for four years now on neopets, Gaia, and a few other minor side sites. Before that I was writing books(Not very good books because I was only eleven... But don't tell me that.. o-o).
How you found us: Your um.. Administrator person set up a advortisement board on Neo.. I thought I should join.
Role play Sample: (Alright, I'll put in part of my book, so.... Yeah) The panic that rose in my throat was one that no one else should have to experience as I screamed out. It was meaningless, wordless and unheard, my scream; but never the less I screamed out, trying to get him to look up, to move, anything. “Wake up! No!” I had screamed. The blood that slowly spilled across the floor though showed that Abe wasn’t waking up, that he was gone. “Come on, come on Abraham. Don’t do this to me!” I had pleaded, knowing deep down that I would get no answer. He was gone.

I tried to reach him, he was only inches from my outstretched hands as I tried to grab his lifeless body. I finally felt the fabric of his shirt at my fingertips, the stupid rough material of the fancy button up shirt I always dressed him up in. I reached just a little further before I gripped the shirt, pulling him back into my arms. “Come on, Come on Abe…” I smoothed back the dirty blonde hair that we shared, looking at his face. “Wake up, are you listening to me? I said you cannot die!”

I rocked Abe in my arms, kissing the top of his head. “Abe, please wake up… Please wake up.” Tears welled up in my eyes, spilling over and slipping down my cheeks. “Please…” I begged. The words became literally painful as my throat closed, choking back sobs. {end}

He said: pretty pink unicorns

[Poe]

Muuuuuutt, I love you. XD For your role play sample... I guess Improv, just type an introduction for your favorite character, or pick one of your favorite introductions that YOU have written. Any piece of your writing that you think is literate enough to get you into this site. :]
Also, for the he said part, make sure you read the rules VERY carefully, cuz the answer is in there, I swear. People always have trouble finding it. =P XD Anyway, just read all the rules and post what he actually said on that part.

If you have any other questions post in the cbox for help!

[Poe]

Nooo, you have the right idea on your he said but that's not right. It isn't in that rule. Sorry.
Your example held a lot of emotion, and I really liked it, just remember that in the actual role play we sorta hope your replies are a bit longer. :} So, find the he said and then we can accept you. =D Read ALL OF THE RULES VERY CAREFULLY.
That's your hint.

[whisp.]

Hello Mutt,
I am sorry to say after much consideration and talk between the admins that we are going to have to deny your application. Our reason being that we are afraid that the role play example, though full of emotion, isn't exactly up to our standards. Here at Fantasia we have very in depth posts. There was also a few spelling mistakes that could have easily been avoided.

You can always come back and audition though.

Thank you for your time.

-Whisp and Poe